I wish I had a fun story about how I got lost and scrambled into my first class tardy, however, I do not. It's hard to be late for a class you're taking online.
Although, this is how I would picture my first day at ARCC. I would arrive to the school roughly twenty minutes before my first class starts. I then would have looked around to see if saw any familiar faces, when I didn't, I would walk alone to my class with a false sense of excitement. After arriving to my class, I would probably get bored (since it's the first day) and lose interest quickly. I would continue to all of my classes that day with virtually the same routine, hoping no homework would follow. That was my hypothetical first day, just about as lame as the truth huh?
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• Spell out acronyms (ARCC) the first time you use them and put the acronym in parentheses behind it. Don't expect your readers to know what you're talking about. This is the way to write the sentence: "... especially since I have never been to the Anoka-Ramsey Community College (ARCC) campus.”
• Classes should be plural not possessive
• Should be a semi-colon before however
• Should be 20