Joseph grew up playing sports, he was a starting football and baseball player at his high school in Lino Lakes, Minn. He then went on to play football at the University of Minnesota, where he found his love for the business industry and for his wife, Amy. Joseph and Amy started their own business together and hit it big; starting the well-known casino chain Ace High.
Joseph left behind his fortune to his two sons; Jobin and Pete. The service will be held from 12-4 p.m. Saturday Feb. 19, 2010 at the Strandford & Son's funeral home in Blaine, Minn.
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great job! i hope you get to ride out your dreams!
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• What is a "husband father"?
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